Corrected Remarks By President Biden

By Erik Sivertsen
The Response
09/9/2022

Listening to President Biden’s speech about the Continued Battle for the Soul of our Nation, I came to the realization that he simply had a few details mixed up. I hate to see our leader so easily confused, so I will help him out and fix the speech so, should he try again, he might enjoy some accuracy mixed with his rhetoric.

From the transcript of his speech, it would appear that he thinks that the Declaration of Independence and the Constitution embody the ideas of equality and democracy. It is true that the Declaration does capture the idea that we are all created equally, but the unique idea is that we are all endowed with rights. What makes America great is not democracy. It is the idea that we all have rights that cannot be taken away, and that we are all free. The Constitution and Declaration of Independence embody the idea of Freedom and Personal Responsibility, and a limited Constitutional Republic.

He also seems to have some confusion about the threats we are facing. He doesn’t seem to understand that the biggest threat to the ideas embodied in the founding documents come from Progressive Democrats. This includes ample evidence of attempts by Democrats to steal elections. This is a true threat to our freedom. Any honest evaluation of the evidence also reveals that Jan 6th was not an insurrection and was instead just an attempt by the citizens to petition their government for redress of grievances related to the rampant election fraud in the 2020 election.

So with these points in mind, I have sought to fix his speech. Here is a Corrected Edition showing the changes. You are welcome, Mr. President, should you feel inclined to try again using these revisions.